Sun Hwa’s Re-write (Harry Potter)

Sun Hwa’s Re-write (Harry Potter)

It is 2030 at the time Harry and his friends are aged 50.

Best friends Harry, Ron and Hermione want to have a good party for Harry’s 50^th birthday. They have had good and bad times together and it was really important for them to have this party since they felt that they were not just friends but family.

The invitation for the party went to Ron, Hermione, Neville Longbottom, Draco Malfoy, Cho Chang, Luna Lovegood and other old friends and fellow graduates from Hogwarts’. The party is to be held at the Great Banquet Hall at Hogwarts because Harry thinks that by doing that, it would be more meaning full and it happens to be the 30^th anniversary of his graduation from Hogwarts. It is really meaningful that the whole friends who are graduates’ because the Hogwarts groups which are Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin do not fight anymore they are peaceful after the happened.

They had a big depressed period because about 30 years ago when they were in their twenties, pure blood wizards started to harass muggle-born family wizards which Hermione is. This changed because some pure blood wizards realised that pure blood wizards are not so different to the muggle-born. Also they started to hate who they recognized as Lucius, who is Draco Malfoy’s father, about being the leader of only pure blood wizards.

Lucius gave a very powerful and controversial talk. It stirred the pure blooded wizards but the speech had both lies and truth. Also his real ambition was to be the leader wizards such as Albus Dombldor. He wanted big power and the honour. So he gathered only pure blood wizards and gave some dangerous and provocative examples of muggles like Hermione.

“We have to make our power for our group, Hogwarts and our posterity. It is important because if we mix with dirty blood wizards our tertiary will be confused,” said Lucius Malfory.

“Why do you think that?” said Arthur Weasley, Ron’s father.

“Oh, Arthur, you also come to me. I will tell you the truth when we have next our secret meeting. I think you will change your mind. If you do not come you will regret it” said Lucius.

A lot of wizards who heard his speech was wondering and didn’t know what he was up to.

After five days the secret meeting was held at Lucius’ secret house which functioned as a conference room. It has password for only pure blood wizards and nobody can break the password because it is tied with massive magic only for Lucius’ Army.

The secret meeting room was crowded because a lot of wizards were curious about his thoughts.

“Why did you make this secret meeting?” asked Amos Diggory who lost his son, Cedric.

“I will give serious notice to you guys now. I’ve been thinking about pure blood wizards’ benefit and lifestyle. Do you know why our jobs are not good? And why we are poor? When we were children, our kind was not poor. But when Hogwarts included dirty blood wizards we lost our job, money and honour. Also the rules changed for them but not for us” said Lucius

A lot of wizards agreed with his saying and their thinking started to change like Lucius Malfoy.

Suddenly Arthur shouted “What do we do first? I suddenly also want to change Hogwarts rules because I’ve never complained my job and my lifestyle before but now I that think about it, I was young and lived in a luxury house with my parents but… that’s no more.”

“The change began as people started to forget the fact that the pure blood is the royal blood! But when Hogwarts stared to mix blood wizards from young age, our lives have changed ever since.” said Lucius.

He also said

“Muggles will attack our world because they don’t have the richness and depth of history and heritage like us. In my opinion, the muggles are no different to our house elves. They are low and they deserve no respect from us. If we remain as a spectator, this situation with the mixing of the race will destroy Hogwarts forever.”

“Yes, I don’t want to recognize your thinking, but I agree. I also don’t want to live in a poor house and I want to earn lots of money with my job” said Arthur.

Wizards were speaking their opinion and making noise. “Hogwarts will not accept muggle-born wizards and mixed blood wizards children,” his group member said.

And the group member who supported Lucius had more secret meetings and they started to prepare for war without the muggle wizards knowing about it. They didn’t tell any wizard who wasn’t in Lucius’ secret meeting.

Lucius and his secret army made magic spells which can only be used by pure-blood wizards. They made defence magic spell to be used against mixed-blood wizards which could not be used by the mixed-blood wizards.

Lucius would always tell his group, “We have to change Hogwarts’ rules as soon as possible.” A lot of his race gathered and supported him. They had no reason to doubt him and so they also wanted to make him the next ‘Albus Dombldore’.

One day, Lucius said, “The time is ours. We will be winner in this world of wizards and we will live a beautiful life like before,” in their secret meeting.

As they prepared their war, a muggle-born wizard, whose name was Raymond, found out about the group and started to doubt wizards because so many wizards followed Lucius, who was a wizard famous to be an evil-doer.

Raymond who was tall, smart and had a well-built body sent a mail to his friends and they, who didn’t know of Lucius’ plans, became aware of this situation and they also started to have secret meetings.

When they had a secret meeting they made a rule which was that pure-blood wizards could not come into their secret meeting because if they were allowed in they could be a spy. They had to attack them.

The ‘No pure blood wizards meeting’

Raymond was very uneasy because he knew that the pure-blood wizards had an effective and well-devised strategy. He started to find and gather wizards that were of the same race as him. Numerous wizards who were muggles, who were about a quarter of wizards, gathered to have a meeting to discuss this problem. Raymond wanted to fight to them but Hermione didn’t want to because she preferred peace between wizards.

The no pure blood wizards supported Raymond’s opinion because they had always suffered discrimination from the pure wizards. It was a cultural situation because Hermione also suffered it when she was student from Malfoy and his friends. But she had good pure blood wizard friends as well so she was not as traumatized.

When those who were not pure blood wizards had a secret meeting they made a rule which was that pure blood wizards could not come in their secret meeting which was the same as the pure blood wizards’ secret meeting. “If they let anyone in they will be a spy and not truly join us.”

Raymond said, “We started to prepare for the attack because we are less in numbers than pure wizards, but I think we are smarter than the pure wizards as when we were muggles we had learnt muggle education before we could use magic and we were taught by our muggle teachers.”

“We need more wizards to join us and we need a leader,” said Raymond.

“What about Hermione? She is a really smart girl. When she and her friends were faced by a big problem she was the one to solve most of it,” said someone who had respected her.

Hermione said, “I don’t want to do it because I don’t hate them. They don’t know what they are doing. We can talk to them about our ways and we should find an agreement. No war!”

They started to prepare for the war which meant that they were taught what to do if they were to fight pure wizards and they would attack the pure wizards too. But many of the wizards who were Hermione’s friends who did not join the pure blood wizards and were muggle wizards wanted to obstruct the war because her opinion was that the others’ behaviours were really silly.

But the time is coming. (6^th of June in 2000)

Lucius and his pure blood wizards blocked no pure blood wizards’ magic inside of Hogwarts. And they started to move against the mixed wizards secretly. A lot of wizards were attacked and suffered cruelty by Lucius’ Army. His army discerned who the pure-blood wizards were and who were not. They caught the wizards and they classified the wizards in Hogwarts.

Hermione’s friends who are not pure blood wizards also started to attack Lucius’ Army, but they were too late. So they hid in the basement of Raymond’s house and they defended the place from others’ magic. But Lucius’ Army found their secret place by a spy whose name was Adrian, who wanted to live comfortably with same racial wizards.

All wizards of the same race as Hermione were arrested by Lucius’ Army. They were imprisoned at Hogwarts’ dungeon. Arthur and Amos cut the claw of wand and gave notice about how do they do. The Pure blood wizards made a leader who is Lucius officially and he became Hogwarts new principal.

On the second day no muggles were caught by the pure wizards.

Lucius announced new rules in Hogwarts to all wizards.

The rules of Hogwarts

1. Muggle-born wizards cannot enter the Hogwarts

2. Muggle-born wizards cannot use magic in wizards world

3. Muggle-born wizards cannot study magic everywhere

4. Muggle-born wizards cannot go back to their own world

5. Muggle-born wizards have to work in pure blood wizards house such as Dobby

(They are slaves so they work like Muggles)

6. Muggle-born wizards cannot talk with pure blood wizards because they are your masters

7. If pure wizards help the muggle-born they will lose their privileges such as the Muggles

These are the rules, we have to follow it. If anyone breaks the rule he/she will have to face punishment in front of all the wizards who are born as muggle wizards.

At that time, all no pure blood wizards divided two teams. One team relinquished their rights and the other team, including Hermione and Raymond, was trying to find a solution. Despite Hermione and Raymond’s effort to persuade all the Muggle wizards, they were divided..

Raymond said “We are more intelligent than the pure wizards because when we were thinking we were only Muggles, we learnt muggle education, and we have also had wizards’ education too. Now, we can’t use our magic and we don’t have our wand to fight them. However, we cannot lose our skills and abilities for our future generations. We are peace makers we should realise we can make wizard’s world peaceful.”

But many of muggle-born wizards didn’t agree because they were worried about the punishments.

Someone said “We will do housework like slaves from tomorrow. I don’t like to believe it but I don’t want to fight, because if we fight them we will die cruelly. I just want to go back to the Muggle world.”

Hermione wanted to persuade all her racial wizards but she didn’t say anymore because she also does not want to believe this in the current situation.

In the morning the pure blood wizards woke them up and put them to work, cleaning of the Hogwarts.

“No magic, Muggles. You know it already, don’t you? You don’t have pure blood so you guys have to do it manually” said Malfoy’s mother who is Nassis Malfoy.

“Vulgar muggles, you never get freedom. We will finish your race this generation” said Lucius in front of all wizards.

He also announced about work for non-pure blood wizards.

“Next day, you will start to work as slaves at pure blood wizards’ houses. You are not allowed magic when you are cleaning up their house. Because you muggles have to clean it up like your parents. It’s not impossible, isn’t it?”

All pure blood wizards started to laugh mockingly.

They who were not include Harry, Ron, Neville, Draco and their some friends because they loved their friends and felt pity for wizards.

All the Slytherin wizards were pure blood wizards so they had more power than other wizards. However, among those wizards, Draco Malfory who was Lucius’ son didn’t join his father’s Army because he loved Hermione secretly.

Goyle who was a Slytherin wizard and Draco’s old friend and a bad person made a group of tormentors because he enjoyed harassing wizards from a young age with Draco.

Goyle made everywhere dirty with his members deliberately. Muggles always cleaned up Hogwarts and they had to visit pure blood wizard’s houses for cleaning.

One day, Hermione came to Draco’s house alone. Malfoy’s house was a really big and luxury house like a museum. She couldn’t finish up with cleaning on time. Even though she tried her best, the house was not fully clean. Draco wanted to help her because Hermione had helped him when they had studied together at Hogwarts.

(Evening)

Lucius had called all his muggle wizards and shouted “come out Hermione”

Hermione came to the front of the wizards.

He said “You didn’t finish your working at my home so you have to get punished here.”

The muggle wizards worried about Hermione and were trembling with fear.

“wh…wha.. Why is that? I alone cannot finish the cleaning in this big house!” said Hermione.

“You will not eat anything tomorrow and you have to work at your close friend house which is Ron’s house.” said Lucius.

Harry and Ron refuted about it.

“She is my best friend I don’t want to order her to do it” said Ron

“If you disobey, you two and the muggle-born will have a big punishment. You will have to kill each other” said Luicus.

Everyone went silent at the time.

Ron said to his mother “Do you know her? She is my lover and my best friend, you also know her and like her why do you obey him?”

“I am not obeying. I am agreeing with him as his words are all correct. If non-pure wizards can’t enter Hogwarts and cannot be wizards, we will become better wizards. They infiltrated us, our worlds and they disturbed our pure ruling. As you know your father lost his job because of them and our family became poor.” said Ron’s mother.

When Hermione came to Ron’s house for slave work, his mother gave her a lot of work and said evil deeds. Hermione didn’t believe it because she had liked Hermione before.

“What the hell are you doing here? Go back to work. You don’t see this dust? You have to clean my bathroom and dispose of the rubbish because we can’t use magic in the house. I’d never clean up the house like you Muggles. You know I am NOT Muggle” said Ron’s mother

Ron was really angry and he shouted to his mum “Stop it! I can break the rules!”,

Hermione cried and said “Ron! Don’t do that. I can do it and I know she did not mean to say that.”

But Ron shouted “Tergeo” (this meant to clean up the house)

Harry also use the magic “Finite Incantatem” (this meant to remove the magic curse)

Lucius called Ron and Harry in front of pure wizards who made up Lucius’ Army.

He gave the two a big punishment. He took the wands from Ron and Harry.

“Sectumsempra” They also cannot enter the Hogwarts anymore.

Hermione could not do anything for them and instead she cried the whole night with her race of wizards. They learnt magic words from each other because they thought they could break away from Lucius’ Army if they had the chance of using their wands.

But they (who are Ron and Harry) cast spell on their wands. They had to find their wands and the others because they really wanted to help them and make peace in wizard’s world.

Ron and Harry gather wizards without Lucius’ Army knowing. They were making their plan for the non-pure wizards. As they were finding the secret road to Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy came to see them. Draco said “I found all the wizard’s wands which were in Lucius’ secret room in my house. I can bring them all to you guys.”

“Why are you helping us? We cannot believe you. You are a MALFOY! You are the son of evil, how can we believe you?” said Ron and Harry.

“If I bring your wands then can I join you? I also really don’t what is happening here. I am tired and I hate my father. I always want to be your friend. You guys also helped me before haven’t you? I didn’t forget it because I was scared and I made myself a promise which was to someday repay the kindness. I want to help you and be your friend” said Malfoy.

He came to his house and found the wands and a secret map inside Lucius’ secret cabinet. (It took Draco a whole week to find on his own because Lucius didn’t talk about his work with his family)

“Evanesco” (meaning find lost object) “Deletrius” (meaning delete evidence of casted spell)

He brought everything and met Harry, Ron and their friends. They sought after the secret path from Draco’s secret map.

“Reducto” (meaning to blast) removed the lock on the jail door entrance. “Relashio” (meaning to remove the chains)

Draco Malfoy gave the wands back to their rightful owners.

Hermione said “Thank you Malfoy. You are NOT evil such as your father. You’ve changed, I know.”

“I really want to change our Hogwarts towards peace” answered Malfoy.

“We have to fight and find our honour. BUT we mustn’t forget what peace is. We can show them that ‘we are not same as them’ for our freedom” said Hermione and Raymond.

They stood against the pure wizards with Harry and his friends. A lot of wizards died but that didn’t stop the war because they fought with a cause.

Finally the war finished by the hands of Malfoy, son of Lucius.

“Avada ketavra” (a disallowed spell word in the wizard world used to kill).

All wizards stopped their attack towards each other when they heard these forbidden words. Draco cried and said to Lucius “I really didn’t want this but if I do not kill you, the war will not stop. Sorry Father, I really want to stop the war and change your way of thinking which is wrong”

“The war has ended. We have to live together as we are all the same. From today onwards, we will always have peace in our world. No greed, no hating, no discrimination anymore. Who wants to live in the past? We lived to have had no happiness yesterday and before. However, as of today this will change. We have to live with our family and friends” said Draco Malfoy

Nobody refuted anything Draco has said because they were tired and scared. They also made peace agreement between pure blood wizards and Muggle-born wizards.

After 30years

A lot of wizards came to Harry’s birthday party and they shared a toast to Harry and 30^th anniversary of peace agreement with their happy smiles.